Teachers Feedback on pitch

Through your pitch you evidenced clear ideas about the style of your music video. This included ideas about mise - en - scene (costume, make-up, props etc) and ideas about camerawork and editing. You will have to have a serious think about whether you intend to make a feminist video as you mentioned. If so a lot of though needs to go in the representation of your character. Lots of good, strong ideas, partically your consideration of the relationship between the images and lyrics. Well Done.