Feedback on rough cut.

We couldn't share our rough cut, to the class as we were having technical issues, but now it is up. Here are the questions we are going to ask:


Do you think that it is similar to our first idea, and the animatic?
Do you like the camera angles?
How do you think we should improve and what should we include?
If you saw more of it, would you understand - the continual of the piece?